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  • #203737

    si

    I saw this over at TOS yesterday, and am a little surprised it’s not been mentioned here (as far as I’ve noticed), not even by that TOSser, Seb:

    http://www.reddwarf.co.uk/competition/

    So, yeah…prizes for poetry, and everything. Let’s see…

    A shithole site set up by Symes
    Lent itself well to making up rhymes.
    A Dwarf ship that’s Red,
    Where everyone’s dead,
    ‘Cept for Lister, who knows all his lines.

    Anyway,competition ends Friday, 12pm (lunchtime, yeah?).

    #203738

    Pecospete666

    You should win at both sites! I do not know what G&T are giving away but they should reward this effort!

    #203743

    Pecospete666

    SI II think a night with Melanie Robinson would be a good G&T gift
    http://twosexyladiescbd.wordpress.com

    #203744

    Phil

    There was a commenter named Pete
    His input was always a treat
    “It’s Vogans!” he’d say
    In that adorable way
    And the admins would reach for “delete”

    #203751

    anniescribe

    Good luck you eligible UK cats
    Alas, for us American brats
    Dave thinks we’re slags
    And we can’t get goodie bags
    We’re only wanted for our DVD stats

    #203752

    KyoSo

    Red Dwarf had many a quote
    Which caused the forum to dote
    Over buttery puns
    They came out in tons
    The brilliant ones made us all gloat

    #203754

    Seb Patrick

    There was a young man from Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch
    Who had a trans-Menai-Strait-travelling cock
    From his home he could screw with
    His girl in Bontnewydd
    That happy young man from Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch

    #203756

    si

    There was a young man from Sheffield
    Who was shit at limericks.

    #203757

    HelloMabel

    I’m digging these, especially the butter one!
    Here’s my attempt:

    A studious young man from Japanymede
    Was researching Titan and Ganymede.
    But he stumbled on this site
    And, caught up in its shite,
    Said, “Sayonara, five-year planymede!”

    #203759

    Danny Stephenson

    G&T Admin

    There was a young man called Lister,
    If Kochanski showed up he’d’ve kissed her,
    But it’s only a dream,
    Or so it would seem,
    For the proof: on his hand is a blister…

    #203765

    Reece

    I wanted to enter the competition,
    But my hopes will not meet fruition.
    It’s a load of bull,
    I’m not eligible,
    Oh shit, something from Red Dwarf… eh… inquisition.

    #203766

    Pecospete666

    Phil you win a night with Melanie Robinson too.
    http://twosexyladiescbd.wordpress.com
    Just give Ian the bills!

    How come nobody pissed and moaned about my new avatar?

    #203784

    Phil

    There once was a pile of poo
    Though some would call it Pete Part 2
    “A dinosaur’s loose!
    The ship’s full of shit juice!”
    Screamed cartoonish shells of the crew.

    #203788

    Jonathan Capps

    G&T Admin

    This THIS is a good thread.

    #203818

    MANI506

    I used underpantski twice.

    #203826

    HelloMabel

    Some topics I’m tired of (or hate):
    Why ‘slag’, said by Dave, was just great!
    Why Norm was a jerk,
    Just how *do* light bees work?
    But most of all, seven v. eight.

    Gladly accepting suggestions on how to fit ‘which Rimmer it is’ in there. :)

    #203829

    Ben Paddon

    I used underpantski twice.

    Red Dwarf has come back from hiatus,
    And so limericks have been created.
    But spent my time instead
    Nominating this thread
    for that coveted Hall of Fame Status.

    #203830

    Brayds2006

    I once met a man from Red Dwarf,
    I told him I owned a Wharf.
    He asked me for proof,
    and not so aloof,
    I told him to go fuck himself.

    …that’s how it works, right?

    #203852

    si

    I am actually struggling to come up with a competition entry. :/

    Mind you, SFX are running a competition with almost identical prizes, and no poetry skills necessary… http://www.sfx.co.uk/2012/11/14/red-dwarf-x-competition/

    #203853

    takerdemon

    I suck at limericks but here’s an futile attempt.

    Lister committed crimes that were petty,
    Kryten found kebabs brown and sweaty,
    The Cat’s pretty dumb,
    And the other one,
    His mum likes alphabetti spaghetti

    #203858

    Phil

    Lister said “slags” in Polymorph
    It’s true, he said “slags” in Polymorph
    I thought this was your favorite show
    I can’t believe you didn’t know
    That Lister said “slags” in Polymorph.

    #203861

    takerdemon

    I think this one is a little better than my first effort actually. Simple yet effective… as you can tell I’ve mastered pomposity even if say so myself!

    In The End he was a joke among men,
    He’s snuffed it a few times since then,
    That wasn’t goodbye,
    You live once then die,
    But sometimes you can live again.

    #203863

    Bexley Heath

    Red Dwarf scripts are written quite witt’ly
    But they’re almost as funny done shitly
    The Smegups are great stuff
    I just can’t get enough
    Of watching Chris Barrie say “chitley”.

    #203864

    Ben Kirkham

    He’s Arnold, Arnold, Arnold Rimmer,
    Without him life would be much grimmer,
    He’s also a fantastic swimmer –

    Oh, hang on.

    #203874

    HelloMabel

    takerdemon and Bexley, this is for you:

    Look at this fine pair of limericks
    Worthy of the title of ‘Rimmericks’.
    Should you meet Chris Barrie
    At DJ, please carry
    Your Rimmericks right up to him-mericks.

    #203875

    si

    Just over twelve hours left to send my email. I’m still having trouble actually coming up with something that might win. Has anyone actually entered?

    #203877

    anniescribe

    If those of you who are eligible to enter don’t do it, I’m gonna choke a bitch. I have three and I can’t do a thing with them. So enter, already.

    #203879

    Blisschick

    ^^ This, because I can’t enter, either, and my poetry streak has been sucked away by my current English class.

    #203893

    HelloMabel

    > I can’t do a thing with them.

    You could always post them here. Just a thought. :)

    #203895

    takerdemon

    > Your Rimmericks right up to him-mericks.

    This line broke me. Kudos!

    I’ve entered, I expect nothing but since I thought it was written already and the rest of my life is only going to be 30 seconds, WHAT THE HELL!

    #203898

    Pete Part Three

    If there’s one thing I’m shit at, it’s limericks,
    So I’m jealous of you lot, you pricks,
    Tried to think of a rhyme
    But I ran Out of Time
    Like that episode from Red Dwarf VI

    #203908

    CoziFantozzi

    There was a technician called Rimmer
    His long-service medals a-glimmer
    With Cadmium 2
    He murdered the crew
    And chance of promotion looked slimmer

    #203909

    MANI506

    I actually had the idea of using underpantski twice and entering it today. I thought a good natured reference to series seven might endear me to Doug. Sadly I had the idea two hours after the competition closed. Oh well, the DVD will be bought and devoured on Monday anyway.

    The love of my life Kochanski
    A stir in my underpantski
    I sit by the machine
    As the laundry cleans
    And rotates her underpantski…

    It’s crap.

    #203921

    HelloMabel

    > A studious young man from Japanymede
    > Was researching Titan and Ganymede.
    > But he stumbled on this site
    > And, caught up in its shite,
    > Said, “Sayonara, five-year planymede!”

    A lovely Red Dwarf fan from Brighton
    Has an urge that there’s just no use fightin’.
    When she meets that Japanymeder
    She’ll find that he can complete ‘er –
    Guess where they’ll meet? ________ _ _____!

    #203962

    SgtSmileyUK

    lol many inspiring rhymes there.

    There was a fashionable feline named Cat
    In the days when Doug was Phat
    and Dave was much slimmer,
    and hung out with rimmer
    so Kryten plucked up his Strat.

    Didnt enter, as the time came too fast
    I was really meanta but couldnt be arsed.
    thought tO site seemed like my cup of tea,
    but I dont like tea or beer only coffee.
    and something green to put in de rolly.

    another ting I dislike I should say
    is smegging knobs , god there so gay…
    but lucky for you all I came here today
    to keep u updated on my RDX game coming this way….

    #203966

    si

    Cheers.

    #203977

    RedDwarfFan2982

    I wrote a couple(I’ll post all but the one I entered, for now)

    Upon the mining ship Red Dwarf
    the crew came across a polymorph
    There was a big commotion
    As it stole their emotions
    Rimmer’s anger was fourth

    My series X themed one:
    Rimmer met his brother, Howard and lied
    The crew took Jesus for a ride
    Simulants attacking
    BEGGs are snacking
    Cesiumfrancholithicmixialabidumrixidixidoxidexidroxide

    When Marooned, you know it’s crucial
    To ration food, when escape is futile
    The dog food was a disappointment
    Aswell as the bonjella gum ointment
    And worse to come is the dreaded pot noodle

    Rimmer is a man of many goals
    Tries his hardest with his soul
    His failure, he blames
    His parents and nicknames
    on rare occasions he’s called Arsehole

    Let me know what you guys think :)

    #204001

    HelloMabel

    > Let me know what you guys think :)

    Of those four I liked the Polymorph one the best. :)

    #204020

    Pecospete666

    I liked series X!

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    #204021

    Reece

    Pretty sure Pecospete666 is the clear winner here.

    #204028

    Ben Paddon

    PecosPete liked Series X,
    So hilarious he wet his kecks!
    His favourite scene
    was the vending machine
    being lifted but looking like sex.

    #204031

    clem

    There once was a man with a plan.
    He’d planned it – it was his plan.
    On a farm he’d breed horses
    With horses and horses
    But for Krissie, he’d need a dustpan.

    #204039

    clem

    There once was a slob and a cat,
    A robot and an utter twat,
    A computer named Holly,
    Rimmer’s blow-up dolly,
    Some skutters and a CGI rat.

    I think my competition entry was better than those, but not much.

    #204041

    Pete Part Three

    There once was a man with a plan.
    He’d planned it – it was his plan.
    On a farm he’d breed horses
    With horses and horses
    But for Krissie, he’d need a dustpan.

    Awesome.

    #204042

    Bexley Heath

    To make their show pre-watershed
    Rob and Doug coined the swearword “smeghead”
    But innocent mentions
    by kids at conventions
    are something the cast’s come to dread.

    When fanficcers write about Rimsy
    the pretexts are always quite flimsy
    When thinking of Listy
    his eyes go all misty
    What happens next goes beyond whimsy.

    #204051

    si

    There once was a man with a plan.
    He’d planned it – it was his plan.
    On a farm he’d breed horses
    With horses and horses
    But for Krissie, he’d need a dustpan.

    I’m with Pete Part Three, Clem – that is, indeed, Awesome.

    #204054

    Seb Patrick

    Shall I be the annoying pedant who points out it doesn’t scan properly, then?

    #204055

    Seb Patrick

    (That sounded mean. I do think it’s good. It just possibly needs a slight tweaking.)

    #204057

    Jonathan Capps

    G&T Admin

    To my eyes, it just needs an extra word in the second line. Something like “He planned it for it was his plan” but better.

    #204058

    si

    I read that line with a beat’s pause where the dash was.

    #204062

    NoFro

    I thought the line was a reference to “It was me plan! I planned it.”

    #204069

    Pecospete666

    Benny the Blade.

    Went on a crusade.

    Looking for a slag to shag.

    He found a old hag.

    And When she started to gag.

    She told him she was a old queen in drag

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    #204070

    clem

    Thanks for the praise guys. Seb you palestine! TOS is shit bring back Ellard etc. ;)
    Did you enter the competition in the end then Si?

    > I thought the line was a reference to “It was me plan! I planned it.”

    It was.

    #204073

    Uncle Monty

    >Benny the Blade.
    >Went on a crusade.
    >Looking for a slag to shag.
    >He found a old hag.
    >And When she started to gag.
    >She told him she was a old queen in drag

    That’s not a limerick, you twat.

    #204074

    Reece

    That’s not a limerick, you twat.

    You’re right.

    It’s a Rimmerick.

    #204076

    si

    I did enter the competition, yes. Came up with something just after 11am on friday. Saw a Tweet not long ago saying that the cast has picked a winner today, and that we’d know more tomorrow. Assuming I don’t win, I’ll post my entry here then.

    #204077

    Ben Paddon

    The limerick’s premise is simple,
    You’ve just got to… uh…
    um…
    er….
    …dimple.

    #204102

    HelloMabel

    > Shall I be the annoying pedant who points out it doesn’t scan properly, then?

    That’s rich coming from Mr. Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch! ;)

    #204103

    Danny Stephenson

    G&T Admin

    There was a young man from Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch,
    Who thought he had warts on his cock,
    This first diagnosis,
    Was just simple psychosis,
    It was Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis….

    #204117

    Ben Kirkham

    Danny wins, I think.

    #204130

    Ben Paddon

    But it’s not a limerick.

    #204133

    Ben Kirkham

    No, but I’m in awe of the spelling. I’ve been to Llanfairpwllgwyngyllgogerychwyrndrobwllllantysiliogogogoch, lovely place.

    As for actual limericks, I love Clem’s ‘plan’ one, though there are many of high quality.

    #204134

    si

    RedDwarfHQ have just Tweeted a link to a vid of the cast reading the winning entry – alas it’s not mine, but to be fair, it is pretty good.

    http://t.co/y639wAsH

    For what it’s worth, my entry(below) had a similar theme to the winner, I thought…

    *ahem*

    Red Dwarf was a hulking great Miner,
    With a crew-you’d be pushed to find finer.
    Wiped out in a blast,
    Now it’s crewed by the last
    Man alive…it’s no luxury Liner.

    #204136

    SgtSmileyUK

    lol was that it? the simplest one won. I was sure going by some of the aboves standards that it was gonna contain a little more. Im not Jealous cos I didnt even enter but i gotta admit some Ive seen blew me away with their brilliance that I thought Id have no chance. still, we got a lotta chuckles out of Limericks again so erm, which way is out

    #204138

    RedDwarfFan2982

    Here’s the one I entered:
    Anything can happen when you are alone
    Stuck in space a long way from home
    Spend the night getting drunk
    Then waking up in your bunk
    Thinking “Where the smeg did I get this traffic cone?”

    #204140

    NoFro

    There was a BSC SSC swimmer
    Who by his parents was treated as dimmer
    He found his brother was a dope
    New parentage gave him hope
    And by the end of “The Beginning” he was a winner

    #204141

    anniescribe

    Awww. NoFro’s is definitely the cutest.

    #204152

    Ben Paddon

    I think a lot of the limericks were rejected because THEY AREN’T SMEGGING LIMMERICKS.

    #204155

    Jonsmad

    Here’s the limmerick I sent in.

    I asked the computer called Pree.
    To send in this Limmerick for me.
    She said “I’ll save you some time”
    “You dont win, no need to complete your last rhyme”
    . . .

    #204158

    Pete Part Three

    I don’t think they were keen on my palindromic haiku.

    #204162

    Bexley Heath

    The winning entry:

    “There once was ship that was red
    Her crew, for the most part, were dead
    Wiped out on a mission
    By the 2nd Technician
    What a total and utter SMEG HEAD!”

    Jeeeeezus. IMHO, that’s rubbish. I can see why they’d choose to pick something so obvious and unoriginal as the winner, since the T&Cs implied they might use it in marketing. But still, I reckon there should be a follow-up competition which actually encourages the kind of witty micro-referencing that’s been going on in this thread (e.g. Clem’s effort).

    …Not that I’m bitter…

    #204164

    Seb Patrick

    >I don’t think they were keen on my palindromic haiku.

    Critics dislike you
    If you write rhyming haiku
    Imagine their whines
    At a haiku with four lines

    #204166

    Jason aka Smeg4Brains

    This is genuinely my entry:

    There was a writer called Naylor,
    Whose movie funding attempts were a failure,
    The fans started to sadden,
    Red Dwarf: The Movie wouldn’t happen,
    But then Dave became their saviour

    I can’t understand why I didn’t win.

    #204167

    anniescribe

    Iambic pentameter not even given a chance
    Shakespeare in his grave’s rolling in a dance

    I was not eligible, so I bloody couldn’t try
    The DVD itself, I couldn’t even really buy
    “It’s my best gift idea” said Sister Dear
    So if by Thanksgiving it is still not here
    Surely I should have it by the Fourth of July

    #204210

    Reece

    My entry:

    I like Stork Margarine because I’ve only got one leg.

    #204216

    Alex

    Might have won if you’d enclosed a fiver.

    #204217

    Reece

    Might have won if you’d enclosed a fiver.

    Mum’s the word!

    #204242

    Ben Kirkham

    Slip Digby won it. The organist.

    #204248

    Danny Stephenson

    G&T Admin

    That’s not what they said in court…

    #204353

    HelloMabel

    > I think my competition entry was better than those, but not much.

    What was it, Clem?

    #204356

    si

    There once was a CENSORED named CENSORED,
    Who reckoned CENSORED was CENSORED!
    When CENSORED said CENSORED,
    CENSORED and CENSORED got CENSORED,
    Now CENSORED is CENSORED cunt!

    #204362

    SgtSmileyUK

    chuckled@Si love it

    #204373

    dodgelister

    There once was a competition online
    Where we each entered a rhyme
    I was hungover
    And wrote when it was over
    So no one ever read mine :(

    #204454

    clem

    > What was it, Clem?

    There once was a roguey named Hogey.
    He was a demented old fogey,
    But with his wiblifier
    The Dwarfers escaped from a dire
    Situation as sticky as bogies.

    #204463

    Ben Paddon

    Buh BAH bah buh BAH bah bah BUH,
    Muh MAH mah muh MAH mah mah MUH,
    Buh BEE bee boo BEE,
    Duh DEE dee doo DEE,
    Luh LAH lah luh LAH lah lah LUH.

    #204466

    HelloMabel

    > But it’s not a limerick.

    > I think a lot of the limericks were rejected because THEY AREN’T SMEGGING LIMMERICKS

    > Buh BAH bah buh BAH bah bah BUH, […]

    Hang on. Are you trying to tell me everybody’s dead…wrong? ;)

    #204472

    anniescribe

    Gordon Bennett, Mabel, everybody’s wrong. Everybody’s wrong, Mabel. Wrong, everybody is, Mabel!

    #205019

    stooeyking

    We are the boys from the Dwarf,
    We’re about 3 million years off course,
    We’ve fought simulantants, psirens and GELFs,
    Hallucinations and personifications of ourselves,
    And 2– some say 3– Polymorphs.

    #214320

    Blisschick

    One night drinking wine, I came upon a thread
    That I had forgotten and now seemed dead.
    I drank a little more,
    And realized that before
    I should have had more in my head.

    (Okay, so it’s a horrible limerick. I’ve had a bottle and don’t care. Cheers. Now revive this thread. Some of you were good at this.)

    #214322

    si

    Four years on and nothing has changed
    We’re all a bit weird and deranged
    Reviving old threads
    We thought long since dead
    And na na na something restrained

    #214323

    si

    Wanted to change the last line to ‘We’re all still decidedly strange’. It scans better.
    But I can’t.

    #214324

    Blisschick

    Aw. Okay, I’ll just read it that way. For you.

    #214325

    si

    Ta.

    #214327

    Nick R

    A guest star from Scotland called Craig
    Human Confidence was who he played.
    He moved to the States –
    The cruellest of fates!
    ‘Cos everyone there calls him Cregg.

    #214330

    clem

    Many fans didn’t like Taiwan Tony.
    Racial stereotypes make them moany,
    But at Pree they went “Phwoar!”
    Now they’re hungry for more.
    Let’s all hope XI’s not pony.

    #214332

    GlenTokyo

    Not gonna lie, didn’t read the date on the post, oh well.

    There once was a lifeform known as the cat,
    Wherever he wanted he shat,
    A smelly gift in your shoe,
    He could do it on queue,
    Confronted, “Deal with that” he said with a splat.

    There was a young scouser called Lister,
    His arse was beginning to blister,
    A curry so hot,
    He was glued to the pot,
    Spewing what could be called a shit geyser

    #214339

    Darrell

    In ’07 those guys Doug and Rob
    Reconvened to talk shop through their gob
    For no reason then
    They split up again
    Which was really strange and no-one mentions it I mean it was genuinely quite confusing at the time and I still haven’t fathomed what the deal was and when was that Son Of Cliche reunion only cause he seems to have gone a bit disassociative with it all again and they don’t follow each other on Twitter I checked out of curiosity cause I’m a nosey knob.

    #214341

    performingmonkey

    They didn’t exactly ‘split up again’ seeing as there was no indication they were gonna rekindle their writing partnership. What is ‘really strange and no-one mentions it’ is the fact that Rob was script editor on the first series of Stressed Eric.

    #214342

    Darrell

    I find it easiest to think of them in terms of the Mitch & Mickey plotline in A Mighty Wind. That’s pretty much exactly The Grant Naylor Story.

    (I’m also being largely frivolous – I’d much rather them have rekindled their friendship, however long-distance, than their professional partnership, and that’s obviously what happened. But that didn’t make a bathetically funny last line to a limerick.)

    #214373

    Jason aka Smeg4Brains

    Us G&Ters are getting old and fat
    Just like the Dwarfers (except Cat)
    We’ve matured a touch
    No one says “cunt” as much
    And hardly a mention of a foaming twat

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